Sunday, November 12, 2006

Winging it

One by one they’re flung
by an enormous catapult.
The elephants land with only a small, distant thud.

Is this too much?
Metaphors should be savored—
Stirred slowly, gently, not shaken.
Elephants, Darling, fling far too easily
as we rapidly thrust toward middle age.

Forgotten promises.
Loves unkempt.
Tossed resentments, larger than life.
This is not your mother’s Almost-Forty
or what granny always said would happen.

Cry, “Freedom! Incoming!”
unabashed.

3 comments:

Inanna said...

Looking back, "unkempt" seems to be the buzzword of the week. Another word idea? Anyone? Or does it matter?

Anonymous said...

"verklempt"?

Liked it all, especially the closer. Wondered whether the GOP/Elephants connection was intentional or accidental given last week's events.
-Cecil

Inanna said...

Maybe...

I have one of those annoying, yet sometimes surprising brains that slips references in from my unconscious. For instance, I'm an incorrigible punster, but I don't mean to be and am often unaware I've made one until someone points it out or laughs. It's sometimes quite embarrassing to have to pretend I meant to say something I hadn't.

I can't really take conscious credit for the elephant/GOP reference, but I like it.